I wrote this treatment for a gay porn film last fall and sent it to a director who liked it. I haven't heard from him in awhile, so I don't know what's going on with it, but I think it's important to see this seminal work published for the world to enjoy...Oh, and it's copyrighted by ME, Michael Strangeways and all rights reserved so don't go stealing it for your own prurient purposes.
It’s 110 degrees in the shade in Jackson County and the power supply is straining at the overload…
Introductory Scene) The offices of Jackson Brothers Tool & Dye (wink). The air conditioning is on the blink and it’s sweltering in the office. Pregnant receptionist Pam goes into labor and the only other female in the office, her best friend Karen, rushes her to the hospital. To alleviate their discomfort, Bob Jackson the normally by the rules boss, allows the 4 men in the sales office to strip down in an effort to keep cool. He sends a 5th man, the youngest in the office, Jesse, home so he can come back later at night when it’s cooler to finish the all important quarterly report. After Jesse leaves, another man Nick volunteers to help Jesse and Mr Jackson agrees. A little nervously, the men gradually start to shed ties, shoes, socks and unbutton their shirts…But Mr Jackson can’t join them; he has a job interview to conduct…
Scene 2)Matt Carruthers is a hunky, young, recent college graduate nervously interviewing with the seemingly for boding boss Mr Jackson. It’s not helping matters that it’s hotter than hell in the conference room. But when Mr Jackson starts to shed some clothes and urges Matt to join him, naturally he has to mirror the actions of his potential new boss…
Scene 3)Tom played hooky from work today and is lounging around in the yard soaking up some rays and drinking beer. When a new mailman, Zack, nearly passes out from dehydration in Tom’s front yard, naturally Tom has to play the good Samaritan and get Zack stripped down and cooled off…
Scene 4)Down in the tool & dye shop, most of the men have been sent home due to the extreme heat. Adam is working on a simple project but spills a dangerous solvent on his pants and the foreman Phil and his buddy Sean have to rush Adam into the chemical shower and strip him down and hose him off….
Scene 5)Upstairs at the office, the three remaining office workers are trying to get cooler… but seem to be getting only hotter. All of them are stripped down to their underwear but no one’s quite brave enough to go all the way. There’s a lot of furtive looks and subtle crotch tugging going on and rampant boners. Then nerdishly hot I.T. guy Devon comes in to hook up some new printer cables under the desks of one of the men and he gets more than an eyeful….the others join in AND Mr Jackson…finally, as their orgasms subside, the power goes out…
End of Part One
Part Two
Scene 6)It’s after work now, and Frank, one of the office workers, goes to his AA meeting. Zack, the mailman is there, too and only two other guys; the heatwave has scared off everyone else…it’s sweltering hot in the darkened meeting room and as the men testify about various addictions, the clothes start coming off…
Scene 7)Back at the office. It’s 10pm and Jesse is back in the office to work on the quaterly report. He’s surprised to find Nick there, wearing very little. Nick explains he has to work late, too…Jesse starts his work, but Nick doesn’t seem to be doing too much. Nick takes a brief sexy phone call from his ‘honey’ and he gets a boner which he doesn’t make much effort to hide. He then shows Jesse a picture of his ‘honey’, and it’s picture of a very hot man, Dr Nate. Jesse is a little surprised and Nick winks and tells him, you can’t judge a book by its cover. They go back to work for a moment then Nick takes another phone call from Nate which develops into full blown jacking off and Jesse joins in. The two are going at it hot and heavy when Marco, the cleaning man shows up. The men quickly try to cover themselves and act non-chalant but soon Marco strips down and they all go at it.
Scene 8)It’s 1am in the morning now, and Pam, the pregnant receptionist is still in labor. Her young husband, Cody, passes out in the delivery room and Dr Nate, (Nick's lover) boots the young man out of the room to recover; besides, Pam has a long way to go and seems to prefer having her best friend Karen as coach. The primary waiting room for maternity is being remodeled so Cody heads to a more secluded waiting room on the next floor where there aren’t currently any staff or patients. There, he meets Ken, a ruggedly handsome Ken Mack-ish, blue collar kind of guy similarly waiting for HIS wife to give birth to their 4th child. When Ken starts commenting on how horny he is because his wife has cut him from sex for the last few months of pregnancy, Cody has to admit he’s suffering, too. Ken also confesses that this last child was unplanned and to prevent anymore ‘accidents’ from happening, that he’s had a vasectomy. Cody asks him about the procedure, then Ken is more than happy to show Cody his scar…of course, Dr Nate has to show up to do a thorough exam and at the end of it all, casually informs them that they are both new fathers of healthy baby girls.
Scene 9)It’s an official brownout now, and the power is off in most of the county. Mr Jackson is too hot to sleep in his bed so he goes to try and catch some zzz’s on his screened in porch. As he tosses and turns, his hands begin caressing his body. Though it’s the wee hours of the morning, there’s quite a few men out and about and Mr Jackson’s little show draws them like moths to a flame. First it’s his next door neighbor, then the 19yr old paper boy and finally it’s a jogger and it gets very ‘Body Heat’ ish as the screens get ripped down…As the last orgasm rips through them, the power comes back on…or maybe it rains…but that’s probably too expensive…
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